Gah, ok so i spent some time working on this one, but I just don't like it, but since i spent time on it I figured why not post it. Advanced Critique encouraged.

v3
It's all about how well you act,
And it's all about that script you write.
They'll never see.
It's all about your anonymity,
And it's all about how you fake it.
They'll never know.
It's all about the time you give it.
And it's all about your molting hours.
They'll never have the time.
It's all about the innocence you lose,
And it's all about the innocence you take.
They'll never have any.
It's all about the silent questions,
And it's all about the silent screams.
They'll never listen.


v2
It's all about how well you act.
They never saw you.
It's all about your anonymity.
They never new you.
It's all about how you fake it.
They never knew the truth.
It's all about the time you give it.
They never had the time anyway.
It's all about the innocence you lose.
They never had any.
It's all about tomorrows that never come.
They never wanted them.
It's all about the silent questions.
They never answered them anyway.


V1
It's all about how well you act.
They never saw you anyway.
It's all about the anonymity.
They never new you anyway.
It's all about how you fake it.
They never knew the truth anyway.
It's all about the time you give it.
They never had the time anyway.
It's all about the innocence you lose.
They never had it anyway.
It's all about tomorrows that never come.
They never wanted them anyway.
It's all about the silent questions.
They never answered anyway.

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